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Alexander's Abilities[DONE]

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Alexander's Abilities[DONE]

Post by Young-Valkyre on Sat May 07, 2011 6:43 pm

Name: Weapons Master
Description: The user has mastered at least one weapon in every weapon class, allowing them to use just about any weapon the can get their hands on, including improvised weapon.
Weakness: This Limits the use of hand to hand combat, thus making the user below average as far as hand to hand fighting goes, thats not to say they cant, but it is to say their focus is weapons.
Range: Weapon extent

Name: Tactical Advantage
Description: Alexander has a unique ability to slow down time in his head; this occurs when he forces his adrenaline to start pumping, giving not only his mind but his body faster reflex timing. This also allows him to target the greatest threat in the area and take as well as analyse what is going on in a mater of a second rather then minuets. His reflex time is only increased by half her standard speed, basically making him able to react at 150% where as others will only ber reacting at 100% this has helped him a lot in his life.
Weakness: As with any adrenalin rush there is a crash, the user will feel tired and things will seem to pass them by, this can be countered with a mild stimulant but that will over time create an addiction. The user will feel a temporary state of vertigo after the ability was used, it will last an equal amount of post as the Ability is used.
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Re: Alexander's Abilities[DONE]

Post by Hina Fujiharu on Sun May 08, 2011 12:25 am

for your first ability, your intelligence is average.. you can only choose between resistance to poison OR blood toxicity. but you can't have both abilities.

for your second ability, I don't have a problem with it seeing it's somewhat a passive ability. ^^

so yep, only change your first ability and you're all ready to go. ^^

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Re: Alexander's Abilities[DONE]

Post by Young-Valkyre on Sun May 08, 2011 12:52 pm

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Re: Alexander's Abilities[DONE]

Post by Kazuya Masato on Sun May 08, 2011 8:05 pm

explain how one is affected, and i deont mean the affects of the ability, i mean how one would suffer from them. do they have to drink your blood, have contact with your blodd and their skin? explain please.

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Re: Alexander's Abilities[DONE]

Post by Young-Valkyre on Sun May 08, 2011 8:24 pm

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Re: Alexander's Abilities[DONE]

Post by Kazuya Masato on Sun May 08, 2011 8:40 pm

Dizziness, Vomiting, Loss of Motor function, Paralysis, Loss of hearing, Loss of eyesight;


holy crap this is a mad case of AIDS. i know what your getting at, but having all these side affects in 10 minutes is just insane, maybe choose one or two because your intelligence is only average. by making your blood toxic as an ability is fine, but with all these affects, can't have it yet dude :/

Alexander gives them an injection, at will leave them with the same condition as he has, only manageable, not curable.


thats taking it somewhat far, per-say this is not an OP ability, but this is a very OP condition. there has to be a cure, especially if you only have average intelligence to back up your blood toxicity ability. remove this please.

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Re: Alexander's Abilities[DONE]

Post by Elseria on Mon May 09, 2011 1:04 am

Looks fine, approved


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