Alexander's Weapons[Done]

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Similar in design to the blades of ancient scimitars, though certainly possessing a unique style of their own, the carbon steel blades have been electroplated to produce the two-tone finish and to protect against rust. The features include all metal guard and fittings, hardwood handles with deep red cord wrapping, and a removable red tassel with mini key ring attachment. 18 in. blades, 26 1/2 in. overall.
Type: Twin swords
Ability: These blades have the ability to cut through the dimensional barrier, allowing the user to jump from one place to another in a matter of moments, or to hide in a place where no one else can find him; Now he can not go back in time, but give the illusion that he is teleporting by stepping in to a dimension where time passes more quickly then our own, but the land marks are the same. To hide he need simply move to a safe dimension with the same land marks as our own.
Weakness: 1)The blades them self's damage the users body, much less the travel between dimensions, they cause Muscular tearing, and slow loss of sight for a short time; each use reduces the user's eye sight by 10%, and takes a 500 word rest post to regain eye sight for every 50% lost. 2) Once you have used the blades depending on where you go depends on what happens;

• ~a) if you go to the dimension that moves faster then ours, for every ten minutes you spend there a second passes in our world, which will allow you to move about a mile in a second if you move quickly, BUT it is not that easy, this dimension is filled with creatures that live to fight, so by passing in to this place you enter a realm of violence and must fight your way to the location you seek.
  
• ~b) if you go to the dimension where it is safe you can only hide there for about 20 minutes, after that it starts to collapse on it self taking you with it, you live but will have to role play finding your way back to our dimension this is done by trial and error, and will take at least 1000 word post to do, but the whole 20 minutes you are in the realm the door stays open allowing others to fallow you in, though the door is unable to be seen.

Extras: Requires 4 post cool down before uses,It can only be used 5 times in a row before a resting post.

I have no comment in your first weapon seeing it has no ability..

however, I'm not so sure I can allow your second weapon. It can already be considered teleportation and it's not even an ability. If you want, you can make cooldown for every slash/teleportation you can do. ie. 4 post cooldown or maybe put it in minutes, say, 10 minutes. I just don't want to see you dodging every attack through jumping through time and space. ^^

cheers~

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Sorry for stepping here, buuuuut I'm too curious and I had to ask you something, did you got the idea for the ability of your second weapon from the books of Phillip Pullman? in concrete, the book named "The dagger".

Never heard of it i just made it up lol and its np i dont mind if ppl comment on my posts

1)The blades them self's damage the users body, much less the travel between dimensions, they cause Muscular tearing, and slow loss of sight for a short time; each use reduces the user's eye sight by 10%, and takes a 500 word rest post to regain eye sight for every 50% lost.

for extra's, just as you included your 4 post cooldown, add how you can only use your teleportation 5 times before a resting post. it makes it easier to look at in that case.

other than that addition that will make things easier, it looks great.

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