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Post by Kurt Rawson on Sat Jun 01, 2013 5:31 am

Blades of Jupiter- Upgrade:

Name: Blades of Jupiter
Appearance:Two long swords made of imperial gold, which come out of two metallic cubes attaches to Kurt's hands (in the palms). They are about a foot and a half long, and have an omega inscribes on both of them in dark blue. The metallic cubes are silver in color.
Type:Swords
Weapon Skill:Now, not only can the swords emerge from the cubes as blades, but they can also pop out and appear as swords with a sapphire colored double hilt. Also, now Kurt can generate the electricity (which is basically just electrons oving through the air from one sword to another, which can generate a current and also has heat as a by-product) anywhere in a 5 meter range and control it anywhere in a 5 meter range.
Weakness:Apart from the fact that it does not affect bad conductors of electricity, it cannot be used efficiently when Kurt is greatly emotionally unstable. It also reflects Kurt's mental state, so when he is either drugged or poisoned,its generation of electricity may not work. The electricity can only work for five posts, and need a four posts cool down. The amount of cuts it takes to cut through tired  armor is directly proportionate to Kurt's strength. It is less efficient when Kurt has been physically injured, and is weak against stone. The more he uses the electricity though, the more visibly tired he becomes, as, it depletes his MP, decreasing it by one stat for one post for each time it is used.
Extras:The swords are blessed by the God of lightning himself, and have been passed on from generation to generation in the Rawson family.
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Re: Kurt's weapon upgrade (Swords of Jupiter)

Post by Caelestis on Sat Jun 01, 2013 5:41 am

Seems simple enough to me.

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Re: Kurt's weapon upgrade (Swords of Jupiter)

Post by Yubie Zeta on Sat Jun 01, 2013 5:56 am

As I said over Skype, I'm butting in. Applications aren't to be approved until they're allowed by current permanent staff (me, Bryn, Alpha, and Carrie). I'll let you know when that changes.

Also, now Kurt can generate and control the current anywhere in a 20 meter range.

First, this is a very wide range. Secondly, you haven't bothered to state exactly what you're controlling, aside from "current". We need more of a better explanation on this, and a much shorter range since this is an upgrade, not a second weapon.

The more he uses the electricity though, the more visibly tired he becomes.

Is this based on your stamina? If so, I'd like a better explanation on that. That's everything for now.
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Re: Kurt's weapon upgrade (Swords of Jupiter)

Post by Kurt Rawson on Sat Jun 01, 2013 6:05 am

Edited. And no, it is based on my MP, and I have edited that into the app.

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Re: Kurt's weapon upgrade (Swords of Jupiter)

Post by Yubie Zeta on Sat Jun 01, 2013 6:22 am

it depletes his MP, decreasing it by one stat for one post for each time it is used.

Does this mean his MP depletes every post? Or just once every use?

Also, now Kurt can generate the electricity anywhere in a 10 meter range and control it anywhere in a 20 meter range.

The range is still too far out, and also, you still haven't explained what exactly you're controlling - I'm assuming "electricity". That's far too vague, as there's electricity in all kinds of things. Detail this further, and I'll look at it again.
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Re: Kurt's weapon upgrade (Swords of Jupiter)

Post by Princess Celestia on Sun Jun 16, 2013 6:29 am

Please update this before June 22nd, 2013, 12:00 PM Haven Time so that I don't have to basket this for inactivity. Thank you for your time, and I look forward to hearing your response soon.
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Re: Kurt's weapon upgrade (Swords of Jupiter)

Post by Kurt Rawson on Sun Jun 16, 2013 7:22 am

I am uable to update this from my phone, please give me 15 days ror all my applications.

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Re: Kurt's weapon upgrade (Swords of Jupiter)

Post by Kurt Rawson on Tue Jun 25, 2013 2:35 am

Edited. And it means his MP decreases by a stat for one post, till it returns back to normal.

Also, since Yenomrah is away, can somebody else look over it? (Preferably not somebody who un-approves all apps that are not scientifically probable.)

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Re: Kurt's weapon upgrade (Swords of Jupiter)

Post by Kurt Rawson on Sat Jul 20, 2013 2:04 pm

Edits have been made.

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Re: Kurt's weapon upgrade (Swords of Jupiter)

Post by Princess Celestia on Sat Jul 20, 2013 9:24 pm

For an upgrade, the range is too large for what you're extending it from, so I ask that you modify that. Also, did you know that this kind of gold is quite fragile? I'm amazed that it can handle the heat byproduct without melting, and that it can cut people without bending and breaking. You can actually dent gold with your teeth - hence the old tradition of biting gold to check if it was real.
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Re: Kurt's weapon upgrade (Swords of Jupiter)

Post by Kurt Rawson on Sun Jul 21, 2013 1:06 am

Done.

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